User talk:AlexandraDrossos

Your page is looking great with a lot of details! It is very well written and organized. There are only a few suggestions I would like to make. I think your Wiki page will look more crisp and concise if you could add visuals, such as graphs. Also, it would be easier to read your page if you could add which papers you are referencing in the text. On a side note, don’t forget to format your References section. Great job, once again!

You have so much great information on your page that is relevant to today's issues! One thing I am curious of is that if there is anyway to expand the healthcare system for better access for Aboriginals and if so what would be good way to go about that. In your healing on reserves part, pictures would be good there for us to see what their medical traditions are like compared to ours. I also do not think you need both MLA and APA citations so you could pick what referencing method you prefer and go with that! I can't wait to see the finished product.

Hi! This was really well formatted. I agree with Taylors recommendation- it could also be an important topic to cover in terms of moving forward. It could be interesting to look at different opportunities we have to apply an integrated healing approach- both with access to health care but also the integration of traditional healing wisdom in the practice.

I really like your topic, especially when the challenges with proper access to health care continue to be a major threat to the well being of the aboriginal community. Aside from the minor citation problems, I think your wiki page is very well formatted and provides an in-depth overview of the issue regarding healthcare in aboriginal reserves. The background information you provided is very helpful, but you can go deeper by elaborating on the intersectionality framework you mentioned. Maybe you can include how exactly does economic class, along with race and gender create the barriers to equal access to health care.

I think your topic is very interesting and relevant to today's society. I think the use of examples would be really useful for your wiki page such as the problem in Saskatchewan that broke out with Aboriginal people being affected by HIV. The government ignored safe injection sites so the issue spread and it is still ongoing today. https://www.skhiv.ca/ is a really great informative website that gives you more information on this issue and I think using this as an example would be really impactful in your research for this wiki page.