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Your page is looking great with a lot of details! It is very well written and organized. There are only a few suggestions I would like to make. I think your Wiki page will look more crisp and concise if you could add visuals, such as graphs. Also, it would be easier to read your page if you could add which papers you are referencing in the text. On a side note, don’t forget to format your References section. Great job, once again!

You have so much great information on your page that is relevant to today's issues! One thing I am curious of is that if there is anyway to expand the healthcare system for better access for Aboriginals and if so what would be good way to go about that. In your healing on reserves part, pictures would be good there for us to see what their medical traditions are like compared to ours. I also do not think you need both MLA and APA citations so you could pick what referencing method you prefer and go with that! I can't wait to see the finished product.

Hi! This was really well formatted. I agree with Taylors recommendation- it could also be an important topic to cover in terms of moving forward. It could be interesting to look at different opportunities we have to apply an integrated healing approach- both with access to health care but also the integration of traditional healing wisdom in the practice.