Grammar Check & Trans Community

A few other grammar/wording fixes I would make in the section Jerusalem: Religion and LGBT: - I might suggest changing the title to Religion and LGBT issues in Jerusalem. I think it sounds better and is more clear. - You describe that being homosexual is "okay" in Judaism. You might consider changing "okay" to another word such as acceptable or common, or even just going into more detail about what you mean by this. - In one of the opening lines, "depending on the orthodoxy of each religion..." I think for some readers, this statement might be confusing. You might want to make it clearer by explaining that each religion has different sects which observe rules differently, etc. - Just a last friendly note: Islamic and Muslim do not mean the exact same thing, so I would encourage you double check your writing and make sure you mean what you say.