Suggestions

Hey!

I really enjoyed reading your wiki page! I think you chose a very interesting topic. I like that you explain everything with a lot of detail, making it easy to understand. I think because the Victoria Secret Fashion Show is so popular, it would be interesting to see that incorporated. The fact that they brand their women as “Angels” and use attractive models to market their products says a lot about advertising females. Also, I am sure you have seen a Covergirl commercial before where they explicitly state “be a Covergirl” and use female celebrities to advertise their products. I think it would be interesting to possibly mention this also. Because both of these companies use females to advertise, I feel like they might be useful examples. Other than that, your page is very well organized, interesting, and easy to follow!

-Manraj Dhanda