Peer Comments

Peer Comments

This is a very interesting and unique topic. I think it it interesting to follow the evolution of makeup as you did here! You did a great job at touching on different points in history and how it has changed. Something that I think personally would be interesting would be to talk about specific branding, and the beauty industry today and how different it is from what you touched on earlier. In addition I think using photos would really strengthen your page as I feel it is a very visually appealing topic! All around great page.

MadeleineLafleur (talk)04:49, 2 December 2016