Suggestion for your topic

I think what you have is very interesting and informative. I think you should maybe relabel your title to “Electoral Reform in Canada” since you currently seem to be focusing on Canada. Also, you have Canada as your example as a first past the post system, and I think it would be useful to also have a specific example of a country with proportional representation and how that impacts their government/society. Also, I think it makes more sense to use “Benefits” instead of “Positives” in your sub-section headings.