Corporate Archives comment

Thanks for the feedback!

I like your suggestion about ethics, I'll definitely do that. I can definitely expand that section, but perhaps not enough to make it's own section tenable. I'll also rename the struggles section for sure.

I'm working on completely overhauling the Outreach section, so you'll have to tell me what you think!

Hi Rosie, I like the changes you've made to the outreach section- overall your wiki is looking really good! One thing I would still look at shifting around, in terms of organization, is the users/patrons section. Because you already discuss how business archives are not typically open to public users in the outreach section, you may want to incorporate the users/patron section into the outreach section OR put the users/patrons section before the outreach section. Other than that, I would maybe recommend expanding upon your examples of corporate archives in terms of content as your descriptions are quite brief. In the 'issues in corporate archives' section, I would maybe rename the 'power' subsection as something like 'power struggles' or 'influence' as power as a stand alone title is a bit vague. Awesome job- looking forward to reading the final product.