Corporate Archives comment

Hi Rosie, I like the changes you've made to the outreach section- overall your wiki is looking really good! One thing I would still look at shifting around, in terms of organization, is the users/patrons section. Because you already discuss how business archives are not typically open to public users in the outreach section, you may want to incorporate the users/patron section into the outreach section OR put the users/patrons section before the outreach section. Other than that, I would maybe recommend expanding upon your examples of corporate archives in terms of content as your descriptions are quite brief. In the 'issues in corporate archives' section, I would maybe rename the 'power' subsection as something like 'power struggles' or 'influence' as power as a stand alone title is a bit vague. Awesome job- looking forward to reading the final product.