Some suggestions

Hi Kathryn,

I appreciate all of the advice. In terms of the case studies, I was initially going to put them under one section called Case Studies as you've suggested, but I thought it might be too long as one section. I agree with your advice on the quote. I wasn't sure either, but I think you are right. I've added hyperlinks to the terms you've suggested. Good idea! I forget that readers may not know what those terms mean. Thanks!