Some suggestions

Some suggestions

Hi Morgan,

Your page is coming along really well. Two little grammatical errors I noticed: in your intro, it should be "cause and effects" not "affects". "It [should be in?] the Italian cities, a scriptural explosion, or revolution...". Under the heading "Italy", I think it is not necessary, and makes the sentence flow smoother, to use "the" before Italian cities. The emphasis is not needed as the heading makes it clear that Italian cities are the ones being discussed. So: "Italian cities underwent..." Otherwise your page looks great!

A few readings that I can suggest for this period:

Bartlett, Beatrice S. “Imperial Notations on Ch’ing Official Documents in the Ch’ien-­lung (1736-­1795) and Chia-­ch’ing (1796-­1820) Reigns.” National Palace Museum Bulletin 7:2 (May-­June 1972): 1-­13, and no. 3 (July-­August 1972): 1-­13.

___________. “Ch’ing Documents in the National Palace Museum Archives, Part One: Document Registers: The Sui-­shou teng-­chi.” National Palace Museum Bulletin 10 no. 4 (Sept.–Oct. 1975): 1-­17.

____________. “Ch'ing Palace Memorials in the Archives of the National Palace Museum.” National Palace Museum Bulletin 16 no. 6 (Jan.–Feb. 1979): 1-­22.

Best, Hannah

HannahWiseman (talk)01:04, 30 March 2015

Hi Hannah,

Thank you for catching those errors and I really appreciate the additional sources!

MorganClendenning (talk)06:09, 30 March 2015