Suggestions from JT

Hi Jessica,

The "Problems and Criticism" section was my favourite section to write for this wiki and I kept going back and forth over whether to draw more attention to the issues of ancient archives or to repeat certain problems where they were relevant. I will add some information on the issues in the intro though and fiddle with the formatting or add another section to make the page more visually appealing. Do you think I should move the entire "Problems and Criticism" section up so it is before the "Near East" section?

Thanks,

Sarah

Hi Sarah,
That's a tricky one...since your focus is on Ancient History and Archives, I think keep it where it is --after all your regions and their descriptions. I think readers will only be able to fully appreciate the "Problems and Criticisms" you raise after they read the main meat of your wiki. You could always add a sentence or two in "Ancient Origins" to introduce some pertinent issues that will arise, to guide the reader along. For example, what I said before about how these ancient institutions may not be considered by some actual "archives".

Your page is looking great!

JT