Feedback - Round 2

Hi Sarah,

I'm going around to our pod members to check in and see if I can offer some last minute feedback. Your page looks really good! I've read through your feedback and like the changes you've made to it.

One thing though: I noticed in a few places that you've included quotation marks around an entire sentence that is otherwise integrated into a paragraph. From context, they seem like you wrote them so I'm not sure if they are a little mistake or if you are just being thorough. I'll list them by citation number in case you want to check them out: 12, 26, 49, 52 (missing a beginning quotation mark), and 70.

Otherwise, it looks great!

MarisaParker (talk)‎

Hi Marisa,

Thanks so much for double checking. They are all quotes, 52 is a few sentences. Often I find it difficult to paraphrase certain sentences especially when the author phrases them the same way I would. But thank you so much for making me check them. It never hurts to be thorough.

Sarah

SarahGiesbrecht (talk)‎

Makes sense, I have the same issue :)

MarisaParker (talk)‎