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Hey, Sarah!

I really like what you have! I learned a lot by reading this section!

The one thing that stuck out to me was the cuneiform section. It's an interesting section, but I'm wondering if you need it? If you gave a little section on all the systems of writing in the other ancient empires, I would say leave it. But as it is, it sticks out.

Good luck!

Hi Rosie,

I see that it is a bit out of place given the layout of the rest of the page. I still want to keep it though. I have made the heading smaller so it calls less attention to itself but I do talk a bit about record formats in other regions but since few, if any survive, there is not much to say about them. Cuneiform tablets, on the other hand, survive in their thousands and so much has been written about them and we can tell so much about the archival practices simply because they survive, I feel I have to talk about them. Although, I recognize that I am quite biased, as the ancient Near East is the most fascinating area of ancient history for me, and why I chose this topic.

Thanks.