Talk:Disability in Workplace

Hi, I enjoyed your perspective on disability in the work place, I enjoyed how you illuminated gendered perspectives and described it as a social construct. A question arose while I read your page, when you mean disability did you mean physical or mental or both? I noticed you used physical examples like "hearing loss", but does your research also apply to mental disabilities? I feel like you could have further elaborated on "invisible" disabilities like mental illness for example depression in the workplace. Also, for layout in your page I would recommend using more headings and categories so that its easier to read. I would also suggest putting images ad graphs to represent statistics? I saw that you included percentages comparing men and women, perhaps you could include some bar or pie graphs showing the evidence to enhance visual appearance. As for references, I see you have cited them properly. However, I could not click on links to get to the webpages. I would suggest adding external links to your references so viewers can access the pages easier.

Hello!

I enjoyed the overall layout and in depth content of your topic! I enjoyed the contrast you drew between gender treatment of workplace disability at the end further analyzed the problem of society's different perceptions about having disabilities. I can also see that you used many credible sources with the extensive reference list and I think that you've done very good research on the topic! For the overall layout, I would suggest that rather than using multiple headers, you can use sub-headers like Header 2 or 3 so that the content is a bit easier to view.

Hi! I enjoyed reading through your wiki page, it definitely goes into quite a bit of detail on the topic. I liked how you individually talked about the gender differences at the end. One thing I would suggest is to bold the vocabulary words that you're defining, such as Disability at the beginning of the wiki page. It does help readers locate the important words and the gist of what you're talking about in the paragraph as well.