Course talk:CPSC522/Multi-Agent Systems
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* The page is written at an appropriate level for CPSC 522 students (where the students have diverse backgrounds): 4 * The formalism (definitions, mathematics) was well chosen to make the page easier to understand: 5 * The abstract is a concise and clear summary: 5 * There were appropriate (original) examples that helped make the topic clear: 5 * There was appropriate use of (pseudo-) code: 3 (Although there wasn't pseudocode, given what you covered it wasn't really needed. Could be helpful if the page is expanded though.) * It had a good coverage of representations, semantics, inference and learning (as appropriate for the topic): 5 * It is correct: 5 * It was neither too short nor too long for the topic: 3 ( you may want to complete the incomplete parts) * It was an appropriate unit for a page (it shouldn't be split into different topics or merged with another page): 5 * It links to appropriate other pages in the wiki: 4 * The references and links to external pages are well chosen: 5 * I would recommend this page to someone who wanted to find out about the topic: 4 * This page should be highlighted as an exemplary page for others to emulate: 4
If I was grading it out of 20, I would give it: 18
I'm struggling to come up with stuff to critique here! Longer walkthrough-style example(s) showing how the theory can be applied in a CS context could be useful.
Formatting error (?): "[perfect rationality] or [bounded rationality]". Maybe you were going for italics? Link error: prisoner's dilema
"The debate on the future of agent-based AI research has... become part of the public debate" (public discourse?)
- The topic is relevant for the course. 5
- The writing is clear and the English is good. 5
- The page is written at an appropriate level for CPSC 522 students (where the students have diverse backgrounds). 5 - great overviews with reasonable examples
- The formalism (definitions, mathematics) was well chosen to make the page easier to understand. 5 - what's there is well chosen
- The abstract is a concise and clear summary. 5
- There were appropriate (original) examples that helped make the topic clear. 5 - great examples
- There was appropriate use of (pseudo-) code. 0 (NA?) - you could always throw some pseudocode in for one of the examples, but it's not sorely missed
- It had a good coverage of representations, semantics, inference and learning (as appropriate for the topic). 5
- It is correct. 5
- It was neither too short nor too long for the topic. 4.5 - solid overview without getting too bogged down in specifics, but slightly on the long side
- It was an appropriate unit for a page (it shouldn't be split into different topics or merged with another page). 5
- It links to appropriate other pages in the wiki. 5 - you actually found some relevant stuff to link!
- The references and links to external pages are well chosen. 5 - good job on this
- I would recommend this page to someone who wanted to find out about the topic. 5 - I actually would
- This page should be highlighted as an exemplary page for others to emulate. 5
If I was grading it out of 20, I would give it: 19.4
You lost 0.1 for the broken link :P
If I were to grade I would give it: On a scale of 1 to 5, where 1 means "strongly disagree" and 5 means "strongly agree" please rate and comment on the following:
The topic is relevant for the course. 5
The writing is clear and the English is good. 5
The page is written at an appropriate level for CPSC 522 students (where the students have diverse backgrounds). 5
The formalism (definitions, mathematics) was well chosen to make the page easier to understand. 5
The abstract is a concise and clear summary. 5
There were appropriate (original) examples that helped make the topic clear. 5
There was appropriate use of (pseudo-) code. N/A
It had a good coverage of representations, semantics, inference and learning (as appropriate for the topic). 5
It is correct. 5
It was neither too short nor too long for the topic. 4: May be a little long; I feel the Game Theory section could be condensed and only highlight concepts are directly relevant to topic
It was an appropriate unit for a page (it shouldn't be split into different topics or merged with another page). 5
It links to appropriate other pages in the wiki. 5
The references and links to external pages are well chosen. 4: I would include more CS-centred material esp regarding how multi-agent systems are used in developing AI, since this is a wiki page for CS students. And perhaps some note/examples on systems science?
I would recommend this page to someone who wanted to find out about the topic. 4: see above
This page should be highlighted as an exemplary page for others to emulate. 4.5: It's pretty good
If I was grading it out of 20, I would give it: 18
Other comments:
- Related to page links should be in a sentence: per instructions.