User talk:TrevorShumka

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Group evaluations

Hi Trevor, can I get these group evaluations please. -- DavidKohler

Remarks on your essay

Hi Trevor,
Thanks for contributing to the wiki with your essay. Here's some feedback for you.

  • You talk about a lot of various different things in your essay: the number of proofs, the practical-use of the theorem, its cultural importance in many countries. It would be great to see something more focused on one of these themes. I think that your theme about the presence of the theorem in everyday's culture is quite interesting and no one else touched this point, more on this could turn your essay into something really neat.
  • For your title, using ==Title== makes things really nice and easy.
  • Make sure you cite your sources, see below on how to format this in your page.
  • When citing your sources, consider using the <ref></ref> tag which produces something like this[1]. If you do so, you then need to add the tag<references/>where you would like to see your references collected. See the code for this page to see how I did this or check the reference.

Best
-- DavidKohler

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