User talk:RileyKoenig
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Peer Review | 0 | 22:25, 27 March 2017 |
I don't see any problem with the layout or the content - I think it is both informative and clear. Just make sure that you don't go over the word limit when you write it.
You should (and probably would) include:
- Introduction (What is a diffuser?)
- Diagrams / images (I think an image showing diffusers in studio rooms or concert halls would be great)
I think section headings are preferrably a word or simple sentences for wiki pages, so maybe re-think about your headings?
- I would probably remove the colon : after the characteristics heading
- Maybe use a subheading: characteristics --> and then use subsubheadings Good diffuser / Bad diffuser?
- Also, maybe use subheading: issues with absorption --> and then use subsubheadings design / materials?
- I think you should avoid siting sources on your subheading. Instead, I think it would be better if you site it after the first sentence of your section "Does the diffusers design cause bad absorption?"
Check your sources! I think some information in "characteristics of a bad diffuser" may need siting. I am assuming the information in section "Does the diffusers design cause bad absorption?" are all from the same reference ([6])... which then wouldn't be a problem.
Overall I think the content and data are all great. Just watch your word limit and make sure to include the introduction and diagrams! :D
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