User talk:MichelleLittle

Remarks on your essay

Hi Michelle,
Thanks for contributing to the wiki with your essay. Here's some feedback for you.

• It seems to me you could have dig more into this theme of Pythagoras being credited for work he might not have produced. It is clear that you did some research here, I would be happy to see more about this. If you follow this theme, then what is the point in your short paragraph on applications of the theorem to real life, it doesn't connect well with the rest, I think it could be simply dropped.

• Consider using the <math>formulae here</math> formatting to display your math formulas. For example, typing <math>a^2</math> gives you $a^{2}$ and <math>\sqrt{2}</math> gives you ${\sqrt {2}}$

• When citing your sources, consider using the <ref></ref> tag which produces something like this. If you do so, you then need to add the tag<references/>where you would like to see your references collected. See the code for this page to see how I did this or check the reference.

Best
-- DavidKohler