User talk:AgnesLuong
Remarks on Homework 5
Hi Agnes,
A couple comments on your homework 5 (I'm writing it here because you sent it electronically).
Prob. 1: You claimed that Diana must have scored 2 over Charlotte in your second step of reasoning based on the clue that she scored more than A and C only had 2 points scored against her, that is not necessarily true at that stage because D could have scored 1 and B could have scored 1 also against C. You would need to say more about it (i.e. how B's total score would not have worked out if he scored 1 against C) before making that claim
Prob. 2: Please label your axis on your graphs! Also, we require a jump discontinuity at x = 3, but you have a removable one. Lastly, we require the limit of x approaching 5 from the left to be 3, that is not shown on your graph.
Remarks on your essay
Hi Agnes,
Thanks for contributing to the wiki with your essay. Here's some feedback for you.
- I liked the video too, next time, have a look here to see how to embed the video directly into your page.
- I really liked your last paragraph about how impressive it is that the old greeks could figure that kind of stuff out with computers, calculators or anything, maybe this would be worth making it a bigger theme in your short essay!
- A title maybe? Using ==Title== makes things really easy.
- Consider using the <math>formulae here</math> formatting to display your math formulas. For example, typing <math>a^2</math> gives you .
- Make sure you cite your sources, see below on how to format this in your page.
- When citing your sources, consider using the <ref></ref> tag which produces something like this[1]. If you do so, you then need to add the tag<references/>where you would like to see your references collected. See the code for this page to see how I did this or check the reference.
Best
-- DavidKohler
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