Remarks on your essay

Remarks on your essay[wikitext]

Hi Matthew,
Thanks for contributing to the wiki with your essay, I liked the theme you picked. Here's some feedback for you.

When citing your sources, consider using the <ref></ref> tag which produces something like this^[1]. If you do so, you then need to add the tag<references/>where you would like to see your references collected. See the code for this page to see how I did this or check the reference.