Muscles defining Masculinity

Hey,

I really liked your topic - you started off with a short description of what you are going to explore and then further went on to provide the readers with helpful definitions. I also like the various links you have made to muscularity, which are not limited to muscle dysmorphia and dieting. Overall, I feel that adding an intersectional analysis and somehow linking your topic to the course would be really great. Hope this helps you!

Thank you