Other Examples

Hi! Amazing job on your first draft and explaining white feminism to readers very clearly. I think that this is an incredibly important issue that is spoken about but not necessarily well understood. I think that another aspect that could be examined are male example of white feminism -- although Dunham and Clinton are great illustrations of white feminism, it would be as interesting to read about men who have fallen into this same category. I am unsure as to who this could be but I feel that that serves as a motivator to illustrate more examples of this category of people. I agree with the in-text citations but that is quite a minor change. Great job so far and I'm looking forward to reading your final draft!