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Hi There!

I thoroughly enjoyed your piece - My video assignment was done on this. I particularly agree with your analysis on Lena Dunham and her contribution to/perpetuation of White feminism. Lena Dunham is very much known in the wider community to actually perpetuate white feminism through her usual dialogue and her tv shows as well. I think it would be an interesting point to consider her otuside of this incident as well - and talk about contemporary film and examples in film, tv and media.