Discussion

Hi,

I found that the way you structured your page to be very effective and concise. The introduction to democracy was clearly communicated and in sufficient detail. The topic you chose is also very interesting. Although I do not know much about it myself, I feel that as an outsider to this topic, it was easy to follow and achieve greater understanding on the topic. The main area I think that you can work on to perfect your page would be to certainly add more to your intersectional analysis, but also focusing on having a bit more detail on how it ties in with the protests and history of democracy in Hong Kong.

Great job!