Suggestion

Suggestion

Love your topic. I found studying this topic in the course extremely fascinating and am glad that someone is continuing it onto their wiki. The information you have provided is amazing, however I would suggest making it a little more wordy. You definitely get the information across to the reader, which is the idea. I personally would like to be able to read it a little more, perhaps elaborating a little more on your points and tying it all together would round it out a little more. Keep up the great work!

SpencerBritten (talk)23:27, 3 December 2014