Wiki Response

Wiki Response

This is a great start to your Wiki assignment. I love how you have used many case studies, such as that of Luma Mufleh. This really seems to show the personal, human aspect of this topic, for instance that refugees are more than just numbers and figures, but each has a unique story. Don't forget to add a fifth academic source, and perhaps consider adding a different type of source than a TedTalk or video, such as a journal article, to further strengthen the breadth of your work. It is interesting that you discuss the "Second A Day" Save the Children video, as I remember how much of an impact that video had on me when it came out, and it is very interesting to see how I still remember it many years later. This shows how the emotional, personal aspect of videos such as these are very good at making an issue relevant to people across the world, and therefore in succeeding at their goal to bring attention to the crisis.

EmmaProctor (talk)03:27, 27 July 2019