Content and references

Content and references

Hello! I think you're off to a great start with this wiki. I really like how you defined all the terms you will be discussing as well as the perspectives you are using to analyze topics (such as the feminist perspective).

One content suggestion I have is to also mention the media and how influences such as TV shows as well as social media have on the topic as that is a big contributor to stigmatization.

I also have a couple of structural suggestions to possibly improve the page. One is that I noticed you mentioned "I will be focusing on abortion stigma within the American context" and typically Wikipedia pages are not written in first person but rather in third person. You could rephrase this by starting the sentence instead with "Within an American context...". I also noticed how you are referencing in brackets but I believe in Wikipedia you can simply reference with the footnote that you already have there, so the in text citations are not required.

Good luck and I can't wait to read the final page!

TinaMadaniKia (talk)20:01, 28 February 2019

Thank you so much for your suggestions. I wanted to really focus in on 2 cases of stigmatization instead of having many topics that are not as well developed within the word count. As for the citations, I just had them in at the beginning to keep track of my footnotes so I didn't skip anything, but my completed page has them removed. Thank you for the reminder :)

LaurenMadu (talk)19:08, 1 March 2019