Things to work on!

Hi there! As you may have noticed a lot of people have been commenting on your formatting. Although it is a minor thing, formatting really affects the reader's attention and their confidence in your article. I also noticed that the focus of your content seems to be quite hetero normative. I'm not sure if that is because of the sources you used, or if it is unintentional, however, you should definitely look at whether or not you are reinforcing the stereotypes we're trying to break.

I really liked how you separated the content by location and the topic of your research is very interesting.

I don't think a conclusion is needed in wiki articles because you're not arguing something.

Good luck!