Talk:Sex Education in East Asia

Your content is great! One thing I would also improve on like the others is the formatting, basically you want your headings to pop out. It just simply makes it look more interesting. Also some images would go a long way. Images are a great way to gain peoples attention towards your work and make them want to read the text associated with these images. Keep up the good work! Cheers

Hi there! As you may have noticed a lot of people have been commenting on your formatting. Although it is a minor thing, formatting really affects the reader's attention and their confidence in your article. I also noticed that the focus of your content seems to be quite hetero normative. I'm not sure if that is because of the sources you used, or if it is unintentional, however, you should definitely look at whether or not you are reinforcing the stereotypes we're trying to break.

I really liked how you separated the content by location and the topic of your research is very interesting.

I don't think a conclusion is needed in wiki articles because you're not arguing something.

Good luck!

Hi there,

I really liked you separated your topic by countries, however, I feel that some of your information is being lost without the use of bold, headings, images, etc. I think your wiki page would greatly benefit from looking into how to make it aesthetically pleasing, as it would help the reader.

I like the content of your page, as it includes a lot of various information on a few countries. Are they randomly chosen, or is there a reason as to why specifically those countries? Maybe include a few more countries if there is space and time.

Also, it would be great to see some statistics, graphs and charts, as well as images so the reader is not overwhelmed with the huge amount of text at once. Also, it can help explain your content better, as visuals add on to the understanding of the spoken topic!

Keep up the good work!

Interesting information but the formatting makes it really hard to look at without the normal wikipedia headings. You would be better off using the formatting tools from wikipedia to have heading bars to separate the different topics just to make it easier to read and sift through. Also the addition of images would make it easier to look at as well-- just anything to split up all the text and make the categories easier to locate.