A Great Start to a Great Topic

A Great Start to a Great Topic

I found that your wiki topic was interesting, and relevant to what is going on in America today. I enjoyed your thought process and layout of the page. However, it felt as though it may benefit from examples of self induced abortion, maybe from a media source. I feel as though examples would open really grasp your readers attention even further. As you do mention abortion clinics, maybe you can talk about how the clinics are portrayed in media. If you relate back to the course notes, an example of this could be the abortion clinic in the movie Juno. Try braking up your text with images relating to your topic, I feel as though it would help your page drawing more visual attention. Over all I believe you have a great start and a great topic.

CierraSkov (talk)23:15, 22 July 2018