Wiki feedback

I really enjoy the idea of the timeline. It really showcases the different changes throughout history and puts a historical spin on it. One thing I would suggest is to refrain from using a wiki page as a source of reference. Maybe look into that wiki you used and find the reference in that to cite. Wiki's can sometimes be an unreliable source.

Also, elaborate further on the timelines. Some of the years have very little information. I think you can find more information on other timelines or can elaborate further using quotations of history (ie. the quotation you used about Bill Clinton).

Overall, I think it looks like a great draft so far. Just some more elaboration will make it better.