Interesting Topic

Interesting Topic

I found your topic to be interesting and relative to the discrimination that is happening today in Canada. I felt you presented the topic and information well. Try to provide a few examples that relate to your topic. Try to relate back to other forms of discrimination towards Indigenous people, and how it may contribute to the impacts on their health. I feel as though the use of images would help you portray your topic better and draw the attentions of your readers. Images will also help brake up the text. Over all your topic was interesting and I look forward to rereading your wiki page when it is done.

CierraSkov (talk)23:41, 22 July 2018