Suggestion

Suggestion

I really enjoyed reading through your page because pregnancy and childbirth is becoming more prevalent in our lives the older we get, whether it be us or other people in our lives who are going through this milestone. The section where you talked about the role of men during pregnancy and the Patriarchal Model as an excellent addition to your page. When the topic of pregnancies arises, people are easy to assume that it only revolves around women, though men are just as involved int the process. I also liked the addition of how media depicts child birth. However, it might also be a good idea to elaborate on the topic by talking about how the other forms of media, other than movies, depict portray childbirth or may even talking about celebrities and their experiences with childbirth.

CharmaineMagday (talk)01:09, 5 August 2016