Peer feedback - Great Job!!!

Peer feedback - Great Job!!!

Hi! I really enjoyed your wiki assignment so far. I appreciate how well organized your page is, how clear your writing is, and how your in-text citations are in place. I find this topic to be very interesting and I like how you took a modern approach to the topic incorporating public figures such as Kylie Jenner and Andressa Urach as examples. I like how you were able to provide readers with a view of cosmetic surgery in a few different countries/cultures. I also liked how you incorporated the work of 12 different reference pieces into your wiki assignment making it very educational to readers.

Just a couple suggestions :) Perhaps you could further explain what medicalization is through examples. As well, if possible it would strengthen your assignment if you are able to include a section about cosmetic surgery in Canada, not only the United States.

Overall, you did a great job!!!! - Alessandra Antunes

AlessandraAntunes (talk)18:53, 28 November 2016