Suggestion

You chose a very interesting topic. I would have liked to read more about how medicalization impacts men; it would have been interesting to see a brief comparison between the two. On another note, I liked that you talked about different timelines with medical practice. Perhaps it would be better if you could divide the different timelines with real life examples so that it is easier to read? Furthermore, to make your page stand out and put this topic more into perspective, you could perhaps add images or graphs to clearly explain the topic?

Don’t forget to add your links and references as well!

Thank you for your feedback. I hadn't finished entering content previously but hopefully the final iteration is clearer and more complete. I agree that it would be interesting to do a comparative analysis of how medicalization impacts men (although there wasn't time or scope for that here, unfortunately). I believe that we're starting to see increases in the impacts on men. I think overall it's an important education piece for everyone.