Formatting and Content

Hi there!

You have picked and interesting topic and seem to be well on the way to having a really great Wiki page for the class. However, I think that there are a few little things here and there that you could improve on. Firstly, your citations and references don't seem to be linked to a reference area at the bottom. At the Wiki help page that was linked in the course content it is explained how to cite your paragraphs and list references at the bottom. Also, some visuals may help with your piece! You can include graphs and photographs, all which are easy to do and listed as well in the Wiki help page given to us. Another area you could improve on is bringing in links in certain topics that could be expanded upon by a different wikipedia page, or give out the link to different websites that could be useful for your page. All of these listed above are formatting features that you could go through at the end and add into your Wiki Page to complete it for a well-rounded piece. Content-wise, I found the introduction a little confusing. You could elaborate on the definition and how that plays in with the female body a little more to delve into the other information in more of a smooth movement.

Hope this helps!

Thank you for your feedback. The previous content seen was very incomplete and at the WIP stage. Hopefully the final ended up being clearer and more interesting with the pictures. :-) Have a great weekend!