Structure & Content Suggestions

Structure & Content Suggestions

What a fascinating topic and so relevant in society today. I enjoyed reading your Wiki page and my only suggestion would be to break up the wording slightly for easier reading. You could do this by including different sections and adding new headings. I also thought it could work well to include a bit more detail on the treatment that is available today. Overall great job and a very interesting topic!

CandiceJoiner (talk)07:55, 30 November 2019