Feedback - Alyssa Han

The medicalization of mental illness is definitely a topic that is becoming increasingly prevalent in mainstream culture. You make many good points in your paragraphs, but I have a few suggestions that may help improve your page. First of all, I think it may make your page easier to read if you include a few more subheadings to split up the long paragraphs. Also, you may want to specify the marginalized groups that you mention so that you're able to give clear statistics and examples without homogenizing the experiences of all marginalized groups. Lastly, it might be interesting to add some discussion on the sociopolitical role that physicians and pharmaceutical companies play in the medicalization of mental illnesses.