Suggestions on "LGBTQ+ children in Immigrant Families"

Hello!

Thank you for sharing. You have chosen a very interesting topic to explore the oppressions one might face as an immigrant and as a member of the LGBTQ community. You have included in-text citations to indicate the sources of your arguments and to enhance their credibility, and the language used can be understood relatively easily. However, I would suggest focusing more on the oppressions "LGBTQ+ children in Immigrant Families" face, and maybe include a short case study to highlight the purpose and importance to have organizations like the "Immigration Equality" and related avocates and campaigns.