Talk:LGBTQ+ children in Immigrant Families

Hello!

Thank you for sharing. You have chosen a very interesting topic to explore the oppressions one might face as an immigrant and as a member of the LGBTQ community. You have included in-text citations to indicate the sources of your arguments and to enhance their credibility, and the language used can be understood relatively easily. However, I would suggest focusing more on the oppressions "LGBTQ+ children in Immigrant Families" face, and maybe include a short case study to highlight the purpose and importance to have organizations like the "Immigration Equality" and related avocates and campaigns.

Hi,

I noticed that the citations that you have put down are in the wrong format. You have used some citations as footnotes for some reason but all of them should be in a footnote format.

In terms of content, I think you did a great job starting off. It would be nice to see more context and some explanations into the topic at hand because I feel that I am reading a lot of peripheral information regarding the topic but not much explanation of LGBTQ children in immigrant families. There is opportunity to delve into more detail around experiences of children in this intersectional lens. Such as day to day struggles and experiences of children. As a wiki post, it should also give a more broad idea of the content. So that anyone who clicks on the page can get some fast and concise information on the topic without having to do too much inferring and analysis.

Otherwise, I think you picked an awesome topic and I look forward to seeing the final product!