Great Content

Great Content

Hello! I very much liked reading and navigating your wiki page. The topic was very interesting and you did a great job explaining its significance, specifically in India. I think that including specific examples of skin-lightening treatments and photo examples of how they work created a great visual for viewers, and I thought that you brought up many relevant points such as how the Caste system plays into it, the role of social media, and ethical considerations. I pretty much think everything about your wiki is great and actually don't have any suggestions, but I did just notice one little grammar mistake you might want to fix: under the heading "medical implications of skin lightening", I believe your very last sentence is a quote as you have a quotation before '15 million', but there is no end quote which I believe should go after 'sold annually".

MikaylaWeissler (talk)22:05, 27 November 2019

Hi Mikayla! Thank you so much for catching that error. I had proofread it and completely dismissed that. It was supposed to be a quote, so I appreciate you bringing my attention to it. I am glad you liked my page.

ImranRai (talk)23:18, 27 November 2019

No problem! Happy to help

MikaylaWeissler (talk)06:56, 30 November 2019