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Hi, I found your topic very interesting. Your article was very clear in its purpose and intention. I noticed that you have cited your work but it's not formatted correctly for a wikipedia page. Hopefully you will find this helpful: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Referencing_for_beginners Something I think you could add into your page that would be beneficial is a photo of the different shades within the same race.
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