Productive addition or modification of the page
This was definitely interesting to read. However, here are a few things that you may consider adding or modifying:
- Under the history section, the entire list seems to be consistent in the format of "Event name (year)" except for the "Royal Commission on Chinese Immigration". Consistency looks better!
- Your title says "Impact of Asian Immigration on Canada's Multiculturalism", but perhaps you could add that part or modify your title to fit the topic.
- Finally, you do a very good job in explaining where the immigrants tend to move, but you could probably add why they choose to move to these places - there are plenty of academic work on that subject.