Talk:Impact of Asian Immigration on Canada's Multiculturalism
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This was definitely interesting to read. However, here are a few things that you may consider adding or modifying:
- Under the history section, the entire list seems to be consistent in the format of "Event name (year)" except for the "Royal Commission on Chinese Immigration". Consistency looks better!
- Your title says "Impact of Asian Immigration on Canada's Multiculturalism", but perhaps you could add that part or modify your title to fit the topic.
- Finally, you do a very good job in explaining where the immigrants tend to move, but you could probably add why they choose to move to these places - there are plenty of academic work on that subject.
I like all the listings of the different types of Acts. Although there are quite a few and can be overwhelming. The statistics are great, however possibly show a chart to depict it in image style so it may be easier for the audience to follow.
Perhaps you could make a section on future implications or outcomes as well, with the amount of asian immigrants at this rate, what it could do for the multiculturalism and the diversity in Canada? Will be negative, positive? Predictions?