Wednesday comments

Hey Morgan!

You have a lot of information here so far -- there seems to be a wealth of information on the National Archives in Australia, very cool.

I have some suggestions, questions re: your outline and headings, though perhaps these will all be answered as you continue to add information.

• (section 2) "National Archives of Australia": it might be helpful to include the dates of each time period you mention (e.g., "Early Beginnings (1920-1954)"; "Independence for the Archives (1961-1983)"; etc
• (section 5) "Archives of Australia": will this section cover archives aside from the National Archives of Australia? If so, you might consider altering the title to something like "Additional Archives in Australia" -- Just to make a clear distinction between National Archives of Australia and Archives of Australia

Overall, nice work! I'm looking forward to reading more about the two life cycle models and their relationship to Australian archives. Best, Alison #2