Peer Review

Hi there!

You've chosen such an interesting topic highlighting a heinous aspect of the Holocaust that I believe has received less recognition than it warrants. The aspects you have outlined are all extremely informative and detailed very nicely! However, I noticed that some paragraphs, notably the ones under the headings of "Gay Men" and "Lesbian & Trans Individuals", did not have many citations for the information provided, which makes it difficult to determine where the information is coming from and to examine these outside sources for their validity. Additionally, while you have mentioned you are already over the word limit for the assignment, I believe it would be incredibly beneficial to have a small section at the end detailing how the treatment of these peoples went unrecognized for so long during the post-war period, and the governmental apologies and policies that have been adopted since in order to bring your topic full-circle.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading your wiki and am very excited to see the final product!