Suggestions

Hi there! I really enjoyed reading your page as this is a topic I found to be super interesting! I liked how you looked at how different cultures perceive health and illness differently and how being ill has different implications and possibly stigma's based on what culture you are from. However, I would suggest adding in more detail in each section as in some parts I was left with wanting to know more about how it ties into your topic of health (also I just wanted to know more because this was an interesting topic). As well if you narrowed your topic it may of been effective in providing more depth and detail into your page. Overall you have a great page and I really enjoyed reading it!