Formatting

Formatting

Hello! Cool topic! I like your sections and the way that you've split up your information, but I feel that this page sounded a bit like an essay with an intro, some points, and a conclusion or discussion. In a wiki page, I believe it is supposed to sound more factual rather than a discussion or argument. I hope you get what I mean! Maybe you can make each title like "Intro", "Social Constructionism", "Culture and Illness", etc, which is what you have in your paragraphs, but maybe make those the title instead, and then talk about what those are.

CarmenLee (talk)21:57, 26 November 2014