A couple suggestions :)

A couple suggestions :)

Great wiki page! I love that you chose such a relevant topic, I just saw some #heforshe pictures on instagram and was wondering what it was about!

There are a few suggestions I wanted to make: There are a couple sentences in your page where I was unsure if you were directly quoting some one or if it was something you had paraphrased. For instance the sentance “ Watson seeks to create a world where both boys and girls are comfortable being strong or fragile and are not going to be confined by their gender stereotypes” If this is a direct quote I suggest that you use quotation marks, and if it is something that has been paraphrased make sure you add a citation. You should also try and add a “References” section and cite all of the references you used in creating your page (this is such an interesting topic, I would love to take a look at the articles and websites you are referring to!)

I also noticed that you use the same phrase “gender equality is not simply a women's rights issue, but a human rights issue” in your introduction as well as in the second paragraph of the “Joining a Movement” section, it is a great expression, but I think it takes away from its powerful meaning when it is repeated. You may want to try rewording the phrase in one of your sections.

Overall I think you’ve done a great job! If you need clarification on any of the suggestions Ive made please feel free to ask:) Thank you for the informative post. Maya Sandiford

MayaSandiford (talk)12:18, 21 November 2014