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Hello, I really liked your article since I've always been interested in the LGBT scene in Israel. I would like it even better if you could incorporate some historical background inspecting how and why Israel came to embrace the LGBT community. Moreover, you could maybe give us an example or two of the stance of surrounding cities(beside the extremes). Great work overall! I liked that you gave us links to the Tel Aviv Pride parade!

AudreyLo (talk)07:28, 3 December 2018

Hey!

I'm really intrigued in your article as I often travel to the neighbouring country of Lebanon and know that LGBT community there is large there but still taboo. I think it's great how there are equality laws in Israel but I think you should provide the LGBT laws that are discriminatory in neighbouring countries such as Lebanon, Syria, Jordan, and Egypt. For example, the act of sexual relations with the same sex is punishable by law in Lebanon. This would definitely strengthen your argument!

KarlaXenaJubaily (talk)07:53, 3 December 2018